After going through and performing a paragraph analysis of my QRG, I noticed that I have very weak developments. I am able to provide examples to the main point to help with organization, but they just seem to appear, with no strong development present. One of the things that I did well was connecting ideas to one another through signal words or phrases, which helped with the overall flow of the document. There was also something that didn't even occur to me as I originally wrote the document: I provided subheadings for the problems associated with each method, but none for the benefits. The benefits were just lumped together in my explanation of what each method was.
My paragraph analysis can be found here.
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