Draft of Public Argument

In this post I have provided a link to my rough draft and has specified what I would like my peers to take into consideration when reviewing my project.

Mudridge, Simon. "Clock". April 25, 2013 via flickr.
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My rough draft of project three can be found at this link.

The whole goal of my project is to convince my audience that geoengineering is dangerous and that it should not be implemented under any circumstances. I would greatly appreciate hearing your feedback on how the article made you feel. I want people to be inspired to take action after reading it, but I know that I have a tendency to ramble. Any general feedback will also be greatly appreciated!