In this post I have addressed what I would appreciate my peers looking for as they review my draft and have provided a hyperlink to my letter.
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Shlabotnik, Joe. "Manatee Mailbox". November 19, 2006 via flickr.
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As always, I would appreciate it if you could let me know if I'm straying from the purpose of this letter. I would also appreciate any suggestions on how to improve my introduction and conclusion because I feel like they are lacking. I am aware that my transitions between paragraphs need work and any suggestions are welcome. Thank you for taking the time to look over my letter!
The rough draft of my letter can be found at
this link.
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