Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

Below is a link to my rhetorical analysis rough draft as well as a short paragraph telling my peers what I would like them to look for when reviewing.

For my rhetorical analysis I chose to focus on an hour and a half long documentary on geoengineering. When reviewing my draft I would greatly appreciate any feedback on clarity. Along with that, if you find that some of my claims are weak, or could use more support/be broken up better let me know. Any and all feedback is welcome!

Moy, Theen. "Well-Supported". November 9, 2012 via flickr.
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The rough draft of my rhetorical analysis can be found at this link.