Paragraph Analysis 2

In the blog post below I have linked to a copy of my draft that has been analyzed and have identified my strengths and weaknesses.


The draft version with my paragraph analysis can be found here.


Much like with the last project, I either have very weak transitions or none at all. Another one of my weaknesses is being able to connect ideas to one another throughout each paragraph. Overall, I have the general ideas I want to discuss in mind, but need to do a better job at elaborating on them. Properly citing and incorporating evidence will greatly aid my goal to elaborate on topics because I'll have one specific point to focus on.

vgm8383. "Labyrinth". March 8, 2008 via flickr.
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